The first one sounds better to me. My journal is not actually a good example of my writing or grammer as its usually stream of thought then hit send...but I used to write up training were I used to work and tons of memos and instructional stuff. I never thought my grammer was all that good until I saw some of the memos my coworkers would write....all people w degrees...some were just horrible. Bad flow, bad word form agreement, ick.
I have some trouble with knowing more words inside my head then I use in conversation because well I hardly ever hear them and so don't know how to pronounce them correctly! Probably a sign of growing up in a non-big-word-using family while reading too many books.
Oh and I also like word puzzles. Call me geek. Not word searches though those are dull.
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Date: 2005-03-24 01:54 pm (UTC)My journal is not actually a good example of my writing or grammer as its usually stream of thought then hit send...but I used to write up training were I used to work and tons of memos and instructional stuff. I never thought my grammer was all that good until I saw some of the memos my coworkers would write....all people w degrees...some were just horrible. Bad flow, bad word form agreement, ick.
I have some trouble with knowing more words inside my head then I use in conversation because well I hardly ever hear them and so don't know how to pronounce them correctly! Probably a sign of growing up in a non-big-word-using family while reading too many books.
Oh and I also like word puzzles. Call me geek. Not word searches though those are dull.