ext_61288 (
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2005-10-19 07:54 am (UTC)
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I might find this to be a difficult assignment.
The structure of your poem works really well. There is a very definitive beginning/middle/end structure.
One technical thing-- in the third stanza, 'probe' should probably be 'probed.'
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The structure of your poem works really well. There is a very definitive beginning/middle/end structure.
One technical thing-- in the third stanza, 'probe' should probably be 'probed.'